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Post by DAE THE WRITER on Apr 12, 2016 5:17:13 GMT -6
It was a rainy Autumn night. Adam and his friends had just gotten back from his 20th birthday. It was the year where Adam's life was gonna change. They decided to go to the pool they had went to for his birthday every year. It had started a terrible storm. They got out of the pool and went to grab there shoes, Adam had forgot them. He and his friends start running to his car. A sudden streak of white flashed before Adam woke up in a hospital bed. He then went back to his college immeditatly. Nobody noticed, the teachers didn't say anything. He went through his years with ease. Became wealthy, found love, was living life to the fullest. One night, he went to bed and when he woke up he was in a hospital again. A withered man, poor, lonely, man with nothing. He had been in a coma for 44 years. He went to rest his eyes as he shed his last tear, and that's when the rain had finally stopped.
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Post by ParmaJon on Apr 12, 2016 10:43:47 GMT -6
This style reminds me of the older shorter creepypastas, pretty good dude.
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Post by DAE THE WRITER on Apr 12, 2016 12:31:03 GMT -6
I wrote along time ago and just realized I should post it. XP
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